Also, for those who aren't on full Patreon, spoiler warning: It goes to full-on Lovecraftian relatively soon. If that's not your thing, beware.
Inadvisably really loves to use the full English lexicon. Dude has a penchant for using the most esoteric and strange words in all of his fictions. I think this does him no favors when writing about something as strange as Lovecraftian fantasy where everything is hard to describe already.
I am enjoying this and I like the premise but its already getting confusing as the dark wilds beyond the human kingdom are reality warping insanity. Not a good sign so early IMO. There's also a red shirt problem in the narrative as they were undercrewed already and he sure does love to run into Cthulhus and fuck up crewmembers... and there aren't even 20 of them but only the main characters even have names.
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