Your recommendation:
346g of protein, 70g of fat. That's 83.17% protein and 16.83% fat. You had almost no carbs in your example
What I said was 177.5g of protein, 133.5g of fat, with a substantial amount more carbs than yours, probably 35g of carbs. That's 51.3% protein, 38.5% fat, 10%...