A Knight of the Seven Kingdoms: The Hedge Knight

Siliconemelons

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The caveat is (again) that this is the most concise (and probably the best) Westeros story Martin wrote, and they only have two more published stories to work with.

Hell, you could argue that even the material they added to this season doesn't particularly hold up. Egg exercising Thunder? Sure, that addition makes sense, but does Egg practicing being a squire make any sense, if the reason he was headed to the tourney was to serve as Daeron's squire? Maekar fighting through the combat to save Aerion does make sense, but why is he also not concerned about Daeron, his firstborn son and heir?

I'm not sure how I feel about the episode 6 additions. Dunc/Egg do come into conflict with Lyonel, but not until decades later, for actions Aegon does as king - Lyonel being somewhat against Egg from the start doesn't make any sense. And Egg not knowingly transferring to Dunc's service wouldn't necessarily change the narrative in the other published stories (presuming Egg kept his ring), but seems like it would add complications that would come up sooner than later.

Edit: I'm undecided about ghost Arlan at the end. Is this Furious 7? Where's Ser Paul Walker.

Wrong movie sir!

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Bald Brah

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They definitely did the FF ending which was dumb because no one cares about ser Arlene of pennytree and the actor didn't even die. It was kind of a middle finger, making a joke at paul walker's goodbye scene.

Fits in with all the pissing and shitting and man meat scenes. The show runners are aiming for low brow irreverent comedy.
 

Mahes

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This was pretty good. The last scene with Pennytree riding with them felt more like a passing of the torch rather than a fond farewell. My main gripe with the show was how they portrayed the story. It would have been better to have just done a 1-6, rather than a 324516. I am tired of stories that go back in time when the story is about the life of a person as a progression. Just tell the story as it happened. Episode 5. which was the best episode, would have been even better if they had not interrupted the combat with a long memory that could have just been made into episode 1.

Still worth watching but I will most likely not watch it again until near season 2.
 
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Aldarion

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It would have been better to have just done a 1-6, rather than a 324516. I am tired of stories that go back in time when the story is about the life of a person as a progression. Just tell the story as it happened.
This 100%.

Its writers sniffing their own farts about being clever writers instead of just telling the fucking story.
 

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Linear storytelling doesn’t always work. It really depends on the story being told and the character involved.

You need a reader/viewer invested in a character before they care about their backstory. If the backstory is strong enough to to grab the reader/viewer, then sure. Otherwise you need to present the character, get the reader/viewer invested, then you peel back layers of story as needed to provide backstory context. You can do a flashback or exposition, but because TV is a visual medium, showing is sometimes better than telling unless the story is better served by the telling.

For a recent example of telling is better, Picard season 3 when the captain is at the bar and telling his experience of Wolf 359. They don’t show it, although as he tells it you hear some sounds in the background like he is remembering the explosions and screams. But that works better because the focus is on the captain’s trauma and him blaming Picard for it as Locutus, so you’re focusing more on the emotion.
 
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