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I Love Sky Pride. excellent character development with humor and wit, some very...interesting moral issues mortal vs immortal choices.

and the ending of the latest arc was very well written. (if you are not on patreon. latest arc/book ends in 9 chapters)
 
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Report back after Book 12 or so!
I fell off at book six I think. I finished the one where he just swam around an ocean the whole book and just willed himself to level up while hiding in caves. It turned into such shit after the characters split up and interactions ceased.
 
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Kiroy

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I fell off at book six I think. I finished the one where he just swam around an ocean the whole book and just willed himself to level up while hiding in caves. It turned into such shit after the characters split up and interactions ceased.

spoiler that shit
 

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Almost done with book one of Defiance, I like a bunch of it minus the use of space terms. Cosmic energy feels…low hanging fruit kind of thing. Which wouldn’t normally be an issue but it is said like 4 million times a chapter.
Make up currency name, use that instead. Souls, salt, blood all translated very well in video games.
 

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I really liked Defiance but it just gets to be total insanity after awhile and I eventually dropped it. Once it departs from Earth it struggles to maintain coherency in a lot of ways.

In my opinion.
 
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Kiroy

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I really liked Defiance but it just gets to be total insanity after awhile and I eventually dropped it. Once it departs from Earth it struggles to maintain coherency in a lot of ways.

In my opinion.

I'm well past the "ocean" book that was spoiled. I can understand not being into it after earth but when these litrpg writers are building their systems almost all road leads to a much grander power fantasies and I feel like defiance does it well. Half way through book 10. Stopping after earth and moving to something on is reasonable too.
 

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Nothing wrong with dropping a book series after it starts to degenerate or get stale.

That being said, I respect when an author doesn't attempt to just rehash the same discovery story of the first couple of books that introduce the small-time survival LitRPG. My second favorite genre is space opera, which many LitRPG books graduate into when the natural result of a cultivation system is interstellar battles between gods.

I also enjoy when an author or series fully embraces some particular concept and does not attempt to shy away from it. Kind of like a specialty in a series that stays at the fore front. I wouldn't want every book series to delve as deeply into the navel gazing cultivation that Defiant of the Fall does, but I enjoy that it stands among the most autistic of cultivation-focused LitRPGs.

For example, I just started book 9 of The Path of Ascension | Royal Road which

Starts with a fairly straightforward premise where there is a very stable group of civilizations of a bajillion worlds that have star-destroying tier people bound by civil agreements, yet have semi-frequent wars held by low and midtier cultivators. Thus the goal of each civilization is to produce the strongest mid-tier cultivators and somehow that is best done by creating the titular "Path of Ascension" where there are rules to uhm, prevent twinking in MMO parlance. What I love about this series is that while it's about the PoV characters, it's really about the system created by the above premise, and the machinations of different cultures to try and create the strongest mid-tier cultivators. I wouldn't want every series to go that deep into the government, industry and other systems to support it, but I enjoy that this series does.

For example, in both Defiance of the Fall and Primal Hunter, the main characters aren't truly integrated into these civilizations and are instead opportunistically dominating them as demanded by the plot, which makes them interesting in their own right.

Conversely, I put down series that get a few books and don't seem to have any unique aspect they get into. Instead it's like the backdrop of a LitRPG book with no inspiring feature the author had to put to pen and really enjoy writing.


All that to say, enjoy Defiance of the Fall and enjoy the autistic cultivation in the later books. Or don't and start a new series when it gets to be too much. Don't hate read books!
 
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Ukerric

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For example, I just started book 9 of The Path of Ascension | Royal Road which
I assume you're reading the first books off Kindle Unlimited, since book 10 went up last month.

What I like in the series is that each arc is well different (except when you stretch an interstellar war over 2 books, 10 & 11). Travelogues, politics (you may be OP, but politics >>> you), and trolling the Sects. And there are so many details that can be blown into full plot arcs if necessary.

(also, if you see a cat offering to train you... say no)
 

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I assume you're reading the first books off Kindle Unlimited, since book 10 went up last month.

What I like in the series is that each arc is well different (except when you stretch an interstellar war over 2 books, 10 & 11). Travelogues, politics (you may be OP, but politics >>> you), and trolling the Sects. And there are so many details that can be blown into full plot arcs if necessary.

(also, if you see a cat offering to train you... say no)
I'm almost done with book 10, and I agree that switching it up a little has kept it much fresher through 10 books than most of the other series. I could really do without the lengthy explanations of every single skill they use in battles though, but I sort of get it too. There isn't really any other way to describe what they do than to just use the skill names, but I still wish he would figure out a way to condense it and skip all that crap. Do I need to know that his [Cracked Phantom Armor] shrugged off the blow a dozen times in one battle?

Also, I feel like early on we were told their skill slots were super limited. Now they seem to have dozens if not hundreds. I understand moving the important ones into and out of their core, but it feels like they now have untold numbers of skills just floating around the outside. Maybe I'm misremembering the explanation, or they go up drastically with level, but it just seems like they have a shit ton now. Which makes battle descriptions even more tedious.

Oh, and I noticed he picked up the annoying habit of "flaring" stuff like that (can't remember if it is Unbound or Primal Hunter, since they all run together) series has been doing for years. In whichever series that one is, he "flares his dexterity" to dodge something, instead of just fucking dodging. I think it is Unbound. Now in Path of Ascension he's "flaring his Concept" and such all the time. To be fair, that makes a little more sense than flaring dexterity, but still, once an author starts using a specific term ad nauseum it starts to grate on me. Like DotF and others having everyone fucking snorting all the time. I'm fucking triggered now by snorting!

I will say, however, that the addition of Shadow/Allie to the narrative has greatly increased my enjoyment of this series, which was previously trending downward like they all do after so many books (expect DCC). She's awesome, and I'd read a series based solely on her.
 
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Ukerric

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Also, I feel like early on we were told their skill slots were super limited. Now they seem to have dozens if not hundreds.
They gain one core skill slot per level, two inner spirit slots per level, and four (?) outer spirit slots per level. So, at level 25, that's 150 or 175 total.
Oh, and I noticed he picked up the annoying habit of "flaring" stuff
My primary annoying bit is that they always blow raspberries at each other. All the time.
 

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They gain one core skill slot per level, two inner spirit slots per level, and four (?) outer spirit slots per level. So, at level 25, that's 150 or 175 total.

My primary annoying bit is that they always blow raspberries at each other. All the time.
That's absolutely ridiculous to have that many skills! I suppose that's why they can have something like Cleanse taking up a spell slot. Thanks for the info, had no idea it was that crazy.

I haven't noticed the raspberry thing really, but I will now that you pointed it out!

Totally unrelated side story, was at a Sacramento Kings game back in the 90s, and the scoreboard was making this annoying buzzing sound. I asked my buddy if it was bothering him like it was bothering me, and he gets this annoyed look on his face and says that he hadn't noticed it until I said something, and now he can't unhear it. Hah!
 
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This thread inspired me to add Chrysalis by RinoZ to my list.

Started reading that series based on you mentioning it. It is fairly interesting. Being a lot different than the normal fare helps a lot. We'll see where it goes though, because multiple books of him being just an ant, I can't see that being enthralling. The author has obviously done something that people like though, so I'm hopeful for the future.

It is also possible that Reddit loves it because I'm fairly certain the author is an 8 year-old amped up on ALL of his Halloween candy at once. That's about the only way I can describe the writing style.
 

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Started reading that series based on you mentioning it. It is fairly interesting. Being a lot different than the normal fare helps a lot. We'll see where it goes though, because multiple books of him being just an ant, I can't see that being enthralling. The author has obviously done something that people like though, so I'm hopeful for the future.

It is also possible that Reddit loves it because I'm fairly certain the author is an 8 year-old amped up on ALL of his Halloween candy at once. That's about the only way I can describe the writing style.
It's the one Jeff Hays audiobook that I just cannot stand to listen to. Maybe I should try to read it.
 

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It is also possible that Reddit loves it because I'm fairly certain the author is an 8 year-old amped up on ALL of his Halloween candy at once. That's about the only way I can describe the writing style.

You'd think that, but you should read some of his other series, talk about cognitive and tonal whiplash.

"Goofy fun" is a deliberate style he's going for for Chrysalis.